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Post by Rekek Listen on Oct 12, 2007 16:15:54 GMT -4
Wow. I suppose its ok... you make it sound very complex... (i dissowned most of your animes so far anyway) at least your getting close to a good plot. ill read the whole thing later... lawl... oddly... the countries you inclued are very unique....to you... Japan... takes over mexico? WTF how did i guess.... Japan= Small overpopulated country/ slighty rich mostly technology surrounded by water eats mainly fish with little to no seasoning what so ever. Communist. Mexico= Declining population due to immigrants leaving country Extremely poor. Eats off the land and cattle. beef. Spicy seasonings. Democratic....(kinda) So how do they mix? .... And why would japan or mexico survive... (NO NUKES, STILL ARE ON AK-47's MEXICO HAS MINIMAL TRAINING.) I guess that makes it unique. I suppose i will let this one pass. But just know canada and the US have guns. big ones. they hate commies. (and hydrogen bombs ^.^ Points to clone) oh and why did WW3 happen. you never answered that. - Im done. 2 stars out of 5. Ok ok.... your my freind ill be nice 3 out of 5.
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Post by Rekek Listen on Oct 13, 2007 8:04:15 GMT -4
so, i read the story.
its a little all over the place.... and didnt seem to have much to do with the prolouge. :_)
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Post by Clone on Nov 2, 2007 18:04:40 GMT -4
pleas next time post your comments in the acual thread
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Post by Rekek Listen on Nov 5, 2007 14:13:41 GMT -4
I would, but the story should be put together on one thread with only the author posting.... do you not agree?
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Post by Clone on Feb 8, 2008 21:21:41 GMT -4
agree
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